Linda asks…Please, rating and feedback on this writing...?I'm struggling a little bit to find constructive feedback on my writing- friends just aren't critical enough! I would welcome you, the yahoo ask public, to offer a rating (1-10) and opinions on the following.
A little context- this describes the death of the protagonists' mother, who (unbeknown to the protagonist) has deteriorated considerably in her addiction. It is intended to have a tone of detachment, being an event that goes
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